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Page 4: Crossover Melee 5 - The Grand Vizier's Garden Party Part Two: Entertainment

shastab24

on Aug. 7, 2013

Thank you, Google Translate.  It can work if you know how to use it (always translate and then translate back, to make sure it makes sense).  Translations, for those that want them:
Panel 3: "Patchwork?  My evil clone?"  "That is correct." (the closest to "That's right." that I could do)
Panel 4: "I'm going to enjoy killing you."
Panel 5: "Not today!"
 
This is also the first time we've seen Patchwork's new costume (designed by deviantART's grayellis) in-comic.  Also, panel 5 there is supposed to be Eiderdown launching Patchwork away using her feather-control power (since they're both made of feathers).  I have some nuances about how Patchwork uses her power that's different than Eiderdown, which I want to explore here, but it's also nice to see a rematch.  Eiderdown isn't caught off-guard about Patchwork being evil this time.
 
This is a part of Crossover Melee.  If you want to be involved, e-mail me at karamesser@hotmail.com or PQ me on this site.