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Page 16: Crossover Melee 9 - Scarecrow

shastab24

on Jan. 23, 2014

Okay, here's the deal: do I make boob lady a stalker, or just someone with a crush?  Here, she's more of the former, possibly (she did deny it, though the denial is so specific).
 
But anyways, we move out of the flashback.  Astral is actually thinking, which is good.  He's a more cool-headed superhero than Sparkle, who lets emotion overtake her too easily (as makes sense with her powers).
 
Also, that hatching on Shai'tan?  It's supposed to be to make him look more menacing.  What do you think?
 
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