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Backwash

whiterabbit

on Dec. 24, 2009

So, since I didn't know if I'd be able to upload this in the morning, I thought I'd do it tonight. It's not bad, kinda like the action, but I think that perhaps she may be jumping around too much. Bah, she had gymnastic training, it works out fine. I'll delve a little more into her past with a "Naze Nani" at the end of the chapter. That ought to clear up a few things, like how she could leap over the fence like she did, or soak up those bullets. Really need to work on my 1/4 and 1/8 faces though…