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Leg it!

whiterabbit

on Jan. 7, 2010

Okay, I need some serious critique, here. Does it look like a smooth transition of action between the panels? It seems a little… jumpy to me. Does the forced perspective in the first panel work for you? Does anyone actually read my comic, or is it just the search engines propping up my pagecount? I know I get the occasional comment from the same one or two people, but does anyone else out there read this?