Kincaid

Kincaid#1 Page 13

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Kincaid#1 Page 13

BSP_Curt
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I was never really happy with how this page came out. Don't get me wrong, it looks great, but I don't feel it easily conveys what's happening to the reader. What is happening is that Elvis is letting out some sort of sonic attack with his scream.
Sound powers were a bad choice, as they are hard to demonstrate in print. Live and learn though.

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    Eh, I could tell what was going on. The bleeding ears and the "AHHHHH"s kind of give it away, lol. I suppose some cooler things could have been done with lettering to really make the scream more intense, but, like you said, live and learn. It looks great regardless…the art for this was amazing.

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