Kloteck Omen

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Kloteck Omen p.1 (Redo)

kahvie

on April 1, 2006

The first page of Kloteck Omen. Obviously this will be changed later, as the story took a huge turn from this in the second page.

EDIT: Redo uploaded on 9/7/07

I said I was going to be redoing pages in my DA journal, so here's the first redo. I started this before my surgery, but it took me a while to pull it back out after that. The past week or so I've been working on it…and again, I finished late at night. Wish I could finish a page during the day, but I don't think that'll ever happen. And as it is late, there may be mistakes that I've missed, so if anyone can spot any, please point them out and I'll take care of 'em:B.

This page could very well spread over two full pages if put in book form, but I thought it pointless to upload one page with Kahvie on it and another page with the candle seperately, so…yeah.

(Note: She's actually laying on a cobblestone floor here, not a wall…just to clear up any questions or confusions on that. I'll be adding more shadows when I get the chance to help fix that.)