Kyloo

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pan 4

happyoctopusink

on July 2, 2006

Hi everyone :-) Sorry I'm so slow at updating. It takes me forever to finish just 1 panel. I freak out just a bit cause I'm worried it will look bad, so I keep reworking things or just stop working all together. I'm trying to get over this so, I can actually tell the story. This part is still just the intro, when Kyloo is little. I was wondering if you guys could comment on these things for me? Is it too cute? I was thinking of breaking it up with action scenes from the current time (or would that be too confusing since were about to go into her Grandfather's flashback?) Also, I'm using different media in Painter. I'm not too thrilled with this water color look. I like the oils better from the previous page or the more airbrushed looking pan 1 and 2. So what do you think? Thanks for the input and for reading :-)
ilene