Lamora

26 - Chapter One

on Sept. 24, 2008

Thanks for the great advice everyone! :)

I hope these canges help, and yes I edited the text too. I think this going through the first chapter again is helping me make for a smoother story now that I'm a bit more practiced with it.

Oh I was still such a newb when doing these pages! XD

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