Erk, the page transition between the previous page and this isn't so good. Maybe I should have had Tara still leaning over the table. (No chair.)
All and all, it's an average page, with no drawing mistakes of majorness. I remembered Zara's… leg… warmer… guard things? As well as the shorts under the dress. Oddly, the backgrounds turned out much better. Detailed backgrounds are relatively worth it, I do believe.
Anyway, I think I've got a good grasp on this 'chapter', compared to the last two. It should flow more nice a smoothly I think. Maybe I shouldn't have switched to what the 'evil base' was doing though. Loses what I had of 'suspense'. I was going to eventually, but I think it was too soon. Hmnnnnh… Well, I rushed this page, and for that it turned out okay. *Shrugs.*
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