Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION

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The Dream

blueyes

on Oct. 29, 2006

Critique: mmmmmm, gotta love that thick ink lining…and gingerbread people! (I got a little lazy, can you tell?) The whole opening dream sequence was to show Meg's deepest desires. Hopefully the reader caught on that her life SUCKED. The lettering is also too dark for the shades that I used. It is just way too harsh on the page. Later, I go to a grayish color for all my lettering.