Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION
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The Dream end
blueyes onCritique: VERY anime and chibi like. Almost comes across as immature. I do pride myself in having a more original opening statment in this however. I've noticed that every other manga style comic I read, starts out with the main character waking up late…agian aparantly…and are bad students at school. Come on people! Stop using that overused opening!!!!
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