Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION

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blueyes

on Nov. 1, 2006

Critique: wow, my profiles sucked on this page! Again, immaturaty is killing me and it's all VERY anime-like. My backgrounds are over simplified. It also looks like I was having problems with the ink. (which I did, the marker/pen was too thick)
Here I introduce the blonde girl,with no part whatsoever to the story, as a friend type person to the main character. In my new comic, I totally and completely cut this scene from it.