Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION
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blueyes onCritique: Here is where I turned the "friend" into the Enemy. wow, she didn't stay in the plot that long at all! And yet, she's on the title page…Oh well! Over simplified because of an awkward pen. And Meg's hair is magically getting longer…
Ha, something I just noticed…I've kept the boarding school uniforms exactly the same!
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