Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION

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I hate it when they laugh

blueyes

on Nov. 13, 2006

Critique: Hmmm, there are a lot of little details that I could have worked on some more. Mostly just proportions and the body figures. I was having troubles with the profiles again on this page and I've just noticed the occurance of "mitten hands" on a lot of the pages. That means that I got lazy and faked it. I think one of the things that I've learned while re-doing this comic is that you need to take time to do details. If you don't cut corners and really take your time on something, it'll turn out way better. Take pride in your work and don't be sloppy!!! I think I was just too eager to post another page to my comic. Patience young grasshopper, patience!