Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION

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weirdly nice cont.

blueyes

on March 3, 2007

Critique: This page always makes me laugh! It was so poorly constructed in script! What was I thinking??? Its like a soap opera. You ask someone a personal question and they turn away with the music flaring up to tell their sob story. I should have taken more time to explain this and taken more pages. Also, the compotsition is lacking on this page. All of the components were not so stretigically placed. You have to think of each page as a picture on its own…you know, appeal to the eye.