Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION

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Sucked in

blueyes

on March 11, 2007

Critique: I DID think that haveing Meg sucked in like that was rather abrupt. I should have explained things a little better. Again, I can't stress the need for a written story line before you draw enough! But hey, you finally meet a new character. that's good, I guess. Also, I don't like her feet in this frame. They're really weird lookin'.

Yeah so this is the end of chapter one…pretty lame. The chapter title didn't even have ANYTHING to do with what happened at all. bleh!!!