Lesson Learned THE OLD VERSION

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New meetings? (chp. 2)

blueyes

on March 12, 2007

Critique: I laugh every time I look at this now. The painting on the "mysterious figure" is so bad! When I first put this picture on drunk duck before the crash, I had people comment on how uncomfortable this made them feel. I guess the message coming across was something like rape??? That is NOT what is going on! Please note that any comic of mine will be rated PG at least. I'm also dissapointed with how simple and bland this turned out. More detail!!!