Thus begins the portion of the redone plot I like least. It is necessary to kind of introduce the other Lockres and begin to get a feel for what they are like, but I dislike how simple these pages feel compared to the previous. In any case, as mentioned before the simpler design does allow me to update more frequently, so expect an update here in a couple days. Quick note on this page: the white speech bubble with black text at the top is Mira talking, which can be 'heard' by the Lockres since they are arguing in his mind (minds?).
Self depreciating pseudo-rant below: I do find it amazing that even with all the time I have due to the buffer (about nine weeks currently), I still somehow could not find the time to fix the mistakes I see on these pages (so lazy of me…). I know practically speaking that the only reason I do not is because I do not notice these things until the night before/ of the update; which is when I actually write these notes. Thus, I do not have the time to go back and fix the mistakes I see. Well, I will get better at this as time goes on I would hope.
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