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City of Intrigue pg 13

Lord Rend

on Dec. 23, 2008

I apologize that my Christmas gift is nothing more than a regular update, but I rather feel that filler should be limited to showing up in-between Cycles if at all. With this in mind, expect an update next Wednesday as well despite New Years (which is nice because I really enjoyed doing the next page).

Moving on… I am fairly happy with this page overall, the only exception being the way Lockre's speech bubbles tend to blend in. The shading looks better than I thought it did too, which is always a pleasant surprise.

Lockre is being a bit stubborn here I think, still trying to convince Mira that being his ally is a bad idea. Then again, he is not used to this, generally at this point even his most adamant 'allies' turn and run so to speak. FYI, he somewhat let Dark take over his voice, but Dark went a little too far with what he said and then Light felt he needed to counter Dark.

As for how Lockre knew what Mira was thinking, Faders can use all types of magic including telepathy and telekinesis. The forum does a good job of explaining it. In Lockre's case however, it is Light who generally tends to use telepathy while dark tends to use telekinesis.

Apologies to those wondering about the answer to Mira's previous question, it will be answered later in this chapter though (in Lockre's backstory), so no worries.

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