EDIT (6-17-09): Well that was a lot longer than ten hours… Sorry about that everyone. Not much to say on this page actually, now that I look at it. My only comments pertain to the sixth and seventh panels in particular. The first is to explain the kind of abrupt transition between Lockre despairing and Lockre willing to fight that occurs between panels six and seven. My own dislike of overly extended internal monologue aside, not every crisis requires pages of exposition to decide. Case in point here: Lockre simply needed a reminder of his earlier promises to his other selves. That alone reminded him that he still has a reason to continue, if only for their sakes. As for panel seven… It was one of my favorite panels to draw (except for Gloom's outfit; never again will I attempt a goth look). Despite that, it was nice to draw the Lockres together for once, not to mention give a view of their early perceptions of themselves.
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