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Genejoke

on Oct. 2, 2012

A little late posting this as I noticed a massive error, i kind of fudged it a bit to get it up.  Again this page isn't that focused and probably seems the most critical page so far.  One thing that may seem like a contradiction is that earlier we stated the comic handles different tones well and now we are bashing it for that, this is a more extreme case where it is felt it went a bit too far.  Our opinions do differ slightly on how much of an issue this is but we all picked up on it to some degree.