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Encounters 12/22

Genejoke

on April 7, 2016

Work has begun on pages of the next chapter and I have to say it is the most rewritten thing I've ever done and it has changed quite dramatically too. Originally it began as a way of examining some of the characters, I designed a plot which would bring about some revelations about a number of characters. because of where I wanted the comic to be going I delayed the story and inserted this chapter to slow the pace and establish Brinevale as a location a little. Once I completed this chapter things changed in what I wanted so more changes were needed. Also I noticed some scenes were fairly repetitive of what I put in this chapter. The more I rewrote it the less it seemed to work so I needed a big change, which I finally hit upon a couple of days back which avoided repition, let the chapter begin with a bang and didn't involve too much of rewrites just rejigging of scenes and locations.