Lost Invisible

Author notes

154

Kxela

on Jan. 9, 2006

For a long time…. well actually everytime i do a chapter, the chapter i'm working on seems really really long and doesn't feel like everything flowed and fit together well. Until the end of the chapter that is. Until then everytime i read the current chapter i'm always asking myself "how's the pacing? How's everything moving together?" Well I finished this page, read the entire chapter over again.

^_^ wow. I was actually quite satisfied. But still i wonder what you guys thought about it (what i just talked about).

Oh. The chapters not over yet. :3


oh yeah- DOUBLE UPDATE. if you're late, you should go back one page :3