Lucid Haze
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SUNSET
Stellar onOkay, the last page was going to be the last page of act 2 but when i went to make the first page of the final act it felt like there was something missing between Rae's exit and the Unnatural Couple kicking their heels on the streets.
Also it felt like it had been a while since DG and Sue had a moment to-wait, no, I had that covered when DG kissed sue a couple pages back. Maybe it's for pacing.
Yeh. That's it.
Pace.
Peace Killjoys.
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