MAG ISA

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NOTES ON PAGE (and rant)
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Yep. The GLITCH is LOVE.

Speaking of "love", I got a story to tell.
While clearing my harddrive of files I no longer need, I managed to find the saved chats between me and my ex (the woman I loved with all my heart and soul… and wanted to marry but things turned sour).

And omg… reading them flashed me back a few years. And wow… its like stumbling on a gold mine. After reading them has made me actually get a sequel idea for MAG-ISA. Though if "sequel" turns out really really short, I might as well add on that story arc to MAG-ISA. Sequel is still in the rough outline stages.

I already got the script DONE (for MAG-ISA) and I'm in the finalizing stages. Perhaps to spice it up, may need addition and deletion of dialog… or the fight sequence details may be changed. Yes this comic has fight sequences but not like the Brood Knight storyline.

Tentative titles for that sequel… which sounds best?:

PARA SAYO - "just for you". Also inspired by a song. Takot Sayo "fear of/for you" by Slapshock (search them in youtube. they got alot of english songs posted there)

PARAISO - since it almost rhymes with "para sayo"… it means "paradise"

PAG-ASA - "hope"

…However, perhaps that was intentional, as it would fit well with the idea of this page…

No excuses for bad art. It WASNT intentional. Thanks for the crit and for pointing it out. Crit on the art, the story, the dialog, and future plotholes (if any) is highly appreciated.

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