TheMidge28: I went back and forth on moving "Oakford", but I'm leaning toward 'leave it alone'. I really like that you drew my attention to your confusion during the scene change! That sort of thing is incredibly helpful to me – thanks!
DAJB: Thanks!
ShinGen: Great! I hope to hear what you think after the story's progressed a bit.
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