Mary Sue Academy

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Bikini talk

Marysueacademy

on Dec. 3, 2009

Hello my fellow Mary Sues and Gary Stus!

Commentary:

-I'm totally not happy with this page. Probably because It's almost 1am and I spent the last few hours trying in vain to fix everything that sucks about it in order to post it up as non-late as possible. Or maybe because I was so happy with last week's page and I feel like I've suddenly gone downhill. Eh well. On the original paper page I actually really liked panel 5, but now I don't really like it. He's supposed to be waving like "WHOA WHOA WHAT" but I've just realised he kinda looks like he's groping the air. BAD ARTIST, BAD. Forgive me, it's late and I've been on my feet for several hours today. ^_^;; I should be in bed but instead I'm updating this for you guys. Because I love you.
-Claire is doutbful.
-He means Kim as in Winona Ryder's character in Edward Scissorhands, for those of you who haven't seen it. (See it!!)
-I like panel three and at the same time I hate it. Mostly because I think I could've drawn it better. But I really love how unattractive she looks in it.
-Speaking of unattractive, I got a few comments before saying that I should draw her with less of a man chin - but it's like that on purpose. All the Mary Sues are perfect, but Claire is all bespectacled, split-endy and man chinny. It's part of her character. Keep criticising me though, because it's the only way I'll learn.