Maxwell Engine

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tsameti

on May 23, 2009

Whoo! Finally.
OK, you may notice as I go that I might change things retroactively in order to improve continuity, redact poor naming decisions, or just to make my old pages prettier.

One thing that I feel might change about these last couple of pages is the Italian's dialogue. (I shall call him Igi, short for Luigi.) I am not well familiar with the grammatical quirks of Europeans speaking English, so bear with me.

Anyway, how can I make this conversation sound better? I'd love to hear any advice you have.