Mayle and Mayhem

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Page 21: Beginning

Triss

on May 18, 2007

Oh, me. I've been so tired lately. I just want to sleep for a century.

Plot: Tam's trying to win Ezzie over by being obedient… unfortunately, he comes off pretty childish. Oh, Tam, will you never learn? May'le is also having a bit of trouble staying awake. She's not much of a morning person, and is used to waking up late as an entertainer (see 1st page). My original draft of this page had her saying, "I'm an entertainer. I'm practically noc-frigging-turnal."

Art: More work with the eyes. Anatomy was a little shaky today (I know Ezzie's head and torso are misaligned) because of time constraints. Background was rushed like I wouldn't've thought possible.

Comic: I've been messing around in the archive a bit (reordering pages and all that). I'm also planning on posting a new version of the cover tomorrow or Monday: stay tuned, chaps and chapesses (mostly chapesses at this point).

Other: Thanks so much for your support. Shoutouts to my "mother" Throgs and my "daddy" Dawn, and thanks to Usedbooks and Darth Mongoose for giving me tips (Mongoose, please explain the layers and lines. How does one put a layer on multiply? Is this even possible in my ancient programs (Elements 2.0 and the original CS))?

Edit: Fixed! And also, there's a new cover to be had.