Plot: I know you're wondering how they ran out of food so fast. It's because they lost much of their stuff in the fire at the Inn. May, the richest of the girls, lost everything, Tam's just a broke teenager, Phia lives from hand to mouth (it's a miracle she's made it this far, really) and even Ezzie is running out of money. So, they couldn't bring much food.
Art: Bit of a rush. Lots of mushrooms. Dashed lines to indicate shaking. Chibis. More sound effects. Trying to vary my angles a bit more. That's about it.
Comic: I'm really trying to do a lot of development in this chapter. Chapter 1 started out with a bang and got the plot moving forward, but very little developmet happened expect the cheap bios. This chappy will remedy that.
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