i am currently beginning revamps of Chi and his Models, so there will be no updates till i'm completed, but the moment i am compleated i shall make an update,also,since this is going to take up alot of my time,there will also be no BNCOF updates either
Yep, everything else is okay, CrimsonOXZ. And a few spelling errors? No, because in almost every panel has a spelling error: [panel one(1): "Tied" should be "tried"] [panel two(2): "Life" should be "live"] [panel three(3): Nothing wrong] [panel four(4): "bit" should be "bid", I think.] [panel five(5): …Nothing wrong.] [panel six(6): "You" should be "You're" and the other "you" should be "your"]
you should have recolored the sister sprite to look like a hologram. Also show that it is unstable by making it distorted once in awhile. There are also a few spelling errors. But everything else is okay I guess.
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Login or RegisterNightshade Axl at
It's been over two YEARS scince you last put a comic in. :UPDATE:
Tokoseibouit at
Did you stop making the revamps? because its been over a year. And it shouldn't take that long.
Respored at
i am currently beginning revamps of Chi and his Models, so there will be no updates till i'm completed, but the moment i am compleated i shall make an update,also,since this is going to take up alot of my time,there will also be no BNCOF updates either
Model AZ at
Update?
Model AZ at
Update?
Sea_Cow at
What about "sadded"?
Oh, well. 5, kthxbai
Respored at
crap,i can't beleive i missed those mistakes
Zane the Last at
Yep, everything else is okay, CrimsonOXZ.
And a few spelling errors? No, because in almost every panel has a spelling error:
[panel one(1): "Tied" should be "tried"] [panel two(2): "Life" should be "live"] [panel three(3): Nothing wrong] [panel four(4): "bit" should be "bid", I think.] [panel five(5): …Nothing wrong.] [panel six(6): "You" should be "You're" and the other "you" should be "your"]
crimsonOXZ at
you should have recolored the sister sprite to look like a hologram. Also show that it is unstable by making it distorted once in awhile. There are also a few spelling errors. But everything else is okay I guess.