Melody and Macabre

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An Unholy Child, Page 4

Xiam

on July 16, 2008

Yes, how DID she see through that clever rouse?

I did my best to make the Corbeau Asylum… I mean… Elementary School… look as it did in Scene 2, Page 8. Unfortunately, I was too lazy to check how many windows there actually were, so let's go with that for now.

I'll fix it in the "Special Edition," haaa.

Anyway… I really hate misunderstandings in stories, movies, TV shows, etc. - the kinds of things that can easily be patched up with good communication, rarely ever are to present some sort of false "conflict." Similarly, Simon could have easily dealt with this by finding her mother and asking if he could talk to her daughter about a possible paranormal sighting. Unfortunately, there were 14 "Donovans" in the phone book, and Simon lacks common sense.

It's okay, though, most people do. It's not as common as you might think. Thereby causing "common sense" to actually be a misnomer.

Meh. It's funnier this way, I guess.