Melody and Macabre

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Lithium & Cyanide, Page 6

Xiam

on Sept. 28, 2008

Okay, so it's not as funny as the previous pages… but OMG, CONTINUITY STRIKES BACK! Especially since we haven't even heard from Emily throughout the entire first half of this Scene. I wonder if it'll come back to bite me in the ass later on…

I was going to do a close-up of the bottle of pills - basically a lazy ripout of the cover page - but I figured it'd be a bit hazardous for the pills to just be sitting open. I could have also drawn it for a new closeup, standing and closed as we see there, but… I'm lazy.

I knew I had to get that table in there, though, I saw his office as kinda cluttered and cramped, with a table, a desk, and probably four file cabinets, one in each corner of the room. I think the door is actually behind Melody, but there should be another behind Mr. White, too. Probably to a bathroom, or a small closet. If it's a closet, I'm sure there's yet another file cabinet in there.

I noticed that I unintentionally gave him a slight habit of starting conversations with "So…" - I think I might keep that if it pops up again. Though I don't see it happening anytime soon.

Probably not at all. It was good while it lasted, eh?

I haven't really decided what kinds of pills he's taking. I mean, I know what KIND, but… not sure as to the name. I figure Generic Brand is fine, I'm not a pharmacist, I don't need to be specific. Not like it's integral to the plot anyway.