Melody and Macabre

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Darkness, Page 1

Xiam

on May 10, 2009

Huh. That's out of character. I wonder what she's thinking.

I'm not that happy with the art, as I'm becoming increasingly aware of the fact that my work tends to slant a little, usually to the left. Which is weird because I'm right-handed. Also, the shading for the dark staircase is a bit gruff.

The stairs were a lot cleaner, but the walls and ceiling… yeah.

Plus, I think the darkness is a bit too forward, as it's actually something else coming up soon-ish that will be the titular darkness. This should be more of a… darker-ness.

Also, I forgot the full design for Spring's shirt, and had to go back and fix it. Aside from a few minor things, though I really should have had Long John talking to SPRING in Panel 3. Oh, well.

This Scene should be fun. I'll give you a hint: MORE OF THE ODD ONE WITH THE ALUMINUM FOIL HAT. :D