Melody and Macabre

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Darkness, Page 10

Xiam

on May 21, 2009

…Huh.

So, who all saw that coming? Anyone? Anyone?

It's not QUITE as I imagined it. Not quite as I want it now, either. Timing is a bit screwy, would have been so much cooler as an animation, and… maybe the "No!!!" could have been shifted over a bit to the right.

As I originally imagined it, it zoomed up on his eye, but no one would even notice it belonged to Death.

A funny thing about this, though - originally, Death would have shouted Melody's name. Then I remembered that not once has he ever called her (or anyone) by name. Except Simon.

Then again, I don't think he likes Simon. Which is an odd subversion of what one might expect.

(And for those wondering… no, my dream didn't end that well either.)