Melody and Macabre

Last Rites, Page 3

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Last Rites, Page 3

Xiam
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WOO!

I hope everybody can get the whole actions here clearly. I should have added some background, and maybe more action lines. But, I only work a few hours in a day on a single comic, and… ugh, I'm already overtime.

I swear, I think I had a different scene in mind when I wrote this. Here's what I had to go on:

(Samael lunges after Melody)
(Death jumps in the way)
(Samael pulls a scythe from midair)

What's even weirder is, he's boasting about surpassing Death, but going after Melody. So I tried to make it vague in this one, and Death just… instinctively going in front of Melody… I hope that came in well.

As for Samael pulling a scythe from midair… I think I could have done it better. I like the positioning stuff for him, at least. I'm getting a bit better at anatomy and motion.

…A bit.

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