Memories from Requiem

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M.F.R Ethereal Heart Profile: The Tragedy of the Dark Wonderland

Xatiav

on Jan. 19, 2011

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Afterwords
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Next profile: Rubican

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Disclaimer -My way of conceiving my stories with all due respect-
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This story, characters, world, universe, etc is © Xatiav and registered under the copyright law at the SACD (Belgium). This story is mine, I will rule it as I want, do what I think is the best for my characters following my wills. I do not care of who you are, how you lived, what is your age, and what is your sexual orientation. I have my own experience of the life and I am what I am and won't change for anybody here. :)
I hereby thank Ayra for her reading, awesome attention and looong comments! I thank Dark Pascual and Peipei for their long time following my webcomics and their awesome comments, as well as ghostrunner for his special sense of humor! XD
I thank everyone reading Memories From Requiem!

I am studying in the first computer graphic school of Europe, working over four cycle of Memories From Requiem, over the complete encyclopedia of Memories From Requiem's universe, over a special book for all the member of Riversky and possibly a videogame of Memories.

I intent to edit the story in Europe (ongoing) and to reach another state.
That is my disclaimer, with no intention to aim at anybody. But I can't satisfy everyone. ;D

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Chapter list:
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- Memories From Requiem: "Her Heart"
CHAPTER 1: Starting of The Prolonged Darkness
CHAPTER 2: Break The Cristal Chair!
CHAPTER 3: The Prince, The Priestess and the Furnisher
CHAPTER 4: Ascend Into The True Faith
CHAPTER 5: To The Eternal Land
CHAPTER 6: Bloodstained Brotherhood
CHAPTER 7: Fading Memories Of The Ethereal Dream
- CHAPTER 7-A: Trails In The Mist
- CHAPTER 7-B: The Ruler
CHAPTER 8: An Echo In The Silence
- CHAPTER 8-A: The Maiden Of The Rose Graveyard
- CHAPTER 8-B: He Who Asks For Ruin
CHAPTER 9: Imperishable Gloom Rhapsody Of The Crimson Belvedere
- CHAPTER 9-A: Nuclear Fusion Rhapsody
- CHAPTER 9-B: Phantasmagoria Of The Cycle Of Life
CHAPTER 10: NecroFantasia
- CHAPTER 10-A: Sad Love Song Of Heaven
- CHAPTER 10-B: Venah
(423 pages)

- Memories From Requiem: "Ethereal Heart"
CHAPTER 1: 15 Years Later
CHAPTER 2: Dark Valkyrja

- Memories From Requiem "Hollow Heliosphere"
CHAPTER 1: Under Moonlight

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Thanks for reading and for your comments !
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@Ayra:
Do not worry about it, I was just surprised.. I knew you didn't like Venah, but…

I know that the final point of view is the reader's own initiative; I know that I'm just the storyteller and that the reader is the one that reads the whole thing, but a reader can misunderstand or show a bad interpretation. In a case of a profile, it is not a story: it is an informative page about a character. I do not consider them as the story since the profile pages are rather the concepts of the characters as they are really. But the opinion do count. :)

You're right, nobody can force anyone to like or to dislike a character and this is definitely not my goal. I just want the readers to understand WHO is is the character. Whether they like it or not is not my concern; it is the reader's own liking and I have no right in telling "like him and not him".

Then I understand more clearly your position when it comes to Venah; you consider that even a god that created the Universe have no rights to decide if one have to die. This said, considering that Mortalis is the Death, when SHE kills, it's just the normal process of the cycle of life. This said, Mortalis is radically different. Venah/LittleV are a part of the process of the Life and Death, but he do not act as Mortalis.

Well, I just wanted to show who he is, what is his past, and how he acts. I do not want a reader to follow my own judgment.

Venah destroying a town -> Fact indeed
Venah feeling he was entirely justified in doing so -> Fact indeed
It doesn't count as wrong because… -> Here I do not agree. It may be an opinion, but in the logic of my universe, it is a fact, whether you consider it as an opinion or not. Venah is not a debatable character, since he can not be understood if you do not know the entire story. But you can have your opinion. Opinions can also be totally wrong since they are not a judgements based on facts. ;(

I do not try to make you think the same way I do.. D:
I just state the things as they are.

The reader think the way he wants. I think the way I want, however I respect the logic of my own universe since I know it entirely; I know how it started, I know how it will end. I know my characters better than anyone. Which is NOT the case of the reader. Then I won't try to force my will to overcome the reader's own will. But I don't like aggressive judgements based on incomplete informations. :/

And you are totally free and right to consider them this way. I based my story on a debate. Trying to tell who was right and who was wrong is a part of the original idea. That is why I like to read your opinions since they are the real reflect of what you think. Thus, I can share MY opinions but I won't try to impose any judgements. :)

Yes, that is your morale; you consider everything as equal, either they are humans or gods. Hakka have been hurt by the Sphere, deeply hurt. Would you refuse her the right to hate what hurt her? Would you be fine if you were refused the right of revenge? I do not think so. Hakka is based on a duality. I hope I'll be able to show it to you in the Dark Valkyrja event. The inconvenient of text is that you do not see the actions.

Then I beg you to wait and see. :/

I fully understand and I understood why you felt this way, and I can't blame you because you got angry after reading Venah's profile. But I don't like aggressiveness. I never liked it, which is why I reacted this way. I am sorry about it.

You can actually read Izuna's part. There aren't much spoils there, but you'll read the guidelines of the Dark Valkyrja's event. However, lot of events got hidden as how and when. :3

That was quite a good debate, which makes my works valuable. :3
And at least that's a debate for the good reasons!

@jerrie, ghostrunner: Thanks