Merc and Tech

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Chapter 1, 02. Boys talk

Erokuso

on Jan. 9, 2013

Here we learn some more stuff about our heroes. Most of this dialogue is based on negative feedback I got from the Prologue. I'm those guys who learn the most of negative feedback than positive, becouse that's what we remember the most; negativity.
For instance; somebody said Enrique looked too old to be 24, so I had to have them talk about it to reflect it among the characters, in a fashion like "Don't take it from me, see what they have to say about it themself", which should add more credibility.