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Minion 86 - Say wha?!

Hguyver

on Oct. 11, 2007

Blargh… Sorry this is late. But school work comes first ya know.

So, I've found that several times in this story arc that I've run into gaps between two parts of the story that I don't know how to transition well and I find myself trying to figure out a way to move it along smoothly. … I dunno. I think this scene works alright. But I know I had better dialogue and planning for it in the past. I just wish I had written it down on something other than an old store reciept…

Anywho, I'm starting to think that Ellaine should really do the talking for those two. The less Rico opens his mouth the less likely he is to say something REALLY stupid.