Misfire Reactional

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07-22

aquapermanence

on April 28, 2010

Chapter 7, page 22.

Looks like I could stand to clean up the colors and shadows on this page, and shrink the panels a bit. I worry that second-guessing myself like this will lead to delays, but at the same time perhaps the comic would benefit from a delay or hiatus. After a year and a half of work I've learned quite a bit from this and other people's comics, but what I've yet to learn is when I should be satisfied, and at what point something is fit to be seen. I fear my reserves of self-confidence are starting to run dry, so please comment. I'm much more of a listener than a talker.

4/30/10: changed the style of the panels to shrink them vertically and add space between them.