Misfire Reactional

Author notes

08-20 and 08-21

aquapermanence

on June 7, 2010

Chapter 8, pages 20 and 21.

iagojester - I actually ended up writing too much for this page, but I'm glad it still fit in the left third. It was tough deciding on a single image for each page since I wanted to include as many of the details I'd written as possible - my original intention had been to keep the drawings modest and easy to color, like a picture book or an illustrated short story. Since I wrote the chapter in two sessions about a year apart, it hasn't done much to satisfy my desire for a longer format, but I do think it's helped me refine my panel layouts to show the things I'm not actually having anyone "say".