Mystery Shopper

Mystery Shopper Episode 1, part 1

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Mystery Shopper Episode 1, part 1

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Okay, so I was never really happy with the craptastic intermediate pages that looked like a primitive children's story book. So I went back to the beginning and spent some time redoing the middle part of the story completely. I am fairly happy with this new version. It's pretty true to the original written story in terms of feel. I like the way it builds from very calm with the first two images, to some energy in the third, then to the explosion of words and images in the fourth at the bottom.

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