Nata Coil

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Prologue: 8

Little Swan

on Feb. 2, 2012

I'm only 18 hours late by my time zone! ;]
I'm really pleased with how this page came out. I think my experimenting with shading worked well. Best of all though, I finally found a way to fill in the background without having too many stray pixels, which meant that it took ten minutes to edit this page, when it usually takes about an hour or two! Hopefully this means I can churn them out easier from now.
I'm sorry I've changed the text style AGAIN. I'm still experimenting, and once I've settled I will edit all the previous prologue pages so they are the same. Personally, this is my favourite so far. Thank you Banes & Tommy for your feedback about the text, I'll find a happy medium between your points during the main story itself.
I think there will only be one more page of prologue before the story starts, hooray!
Replies:
Banes: Thank you for letting me know about fonts :) Having a comic that's easier to read is probably more important! I wouldn't say you're suggestible; I'm just glad I'm doing my job!
Tommy: That doesn't sound goofy at all, I think it's quite sweet :) I'll find a way to include some hand-lettered things too.