I want to make one fact perfectly clear, here: The dialogue in the next few pages disgusts me. It's awkward, stilted and forced, but I really couldn't think of any other way to put in terms that sounded more fluent or natural. For that, I apologize, and if you want to complain about it you can.
Anyway. I hope everyone had a very Merry Christmas, Hanukkah, etc. and a Happy New Year. I'm really excited for all the things that are supposed to happen in 2008, are you? It'll be the first presidential election I'll be able to vote in and Super Smash Brothers Brawl comes out in February. I can't wait!
This year and update also marks the BEGINNING OF THE SCENE I'VE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO EVERY SINCE STARTING THE COMIC THREE OR FOUR YEARS AGO. I've spent so much time using this part as motivation to get through all work required for the previous 100+ pages. I really hope I don't mess it up or disappoint you guys. I'm quite excited. I took everyone's suggestions on the last few pages and put them into practice here. I tried making the shadows darker and more intense per a night-time setting, and tried making everything a little darker. Does anyone have any further suggestions? Are there any places I've made improvements? I find these comments helpful and they DO NOT HURT MY FEELINGS. Feel free to speak your mind. Backgrounds and setting is also going to play a huge role in this scene, so this page also (hopefully) marks the beginning of detailed, intricate backgrounds for the comic. Feedback on those are also appreciated.
Additionally, THERE WILL BE ANOTHER UPDATE ON MONDAY. Be sure to check back then for the next page. Coincidentally, Monday will also be the first day of the new semester. There are a bunch of classes I'm really looking forward to taking, as my courseload finally has classes that have something to do with my major and are not just GenEds.
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