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istaerlus

on Oct. 11, 2009

Happy Thanks Givings, I didn't mean for this page to land on Thanks Giving day, it just worked out like that.

Anyway, we're back to Krogar and captain Donovan again. I'm not very pleased with this page. First off, it's just talking head, the only action on the whole page is when Krogar slams his fist on the desk. And secondly two of the frames (the first and last) are almost identical, and they are almost the same as a frame of Krogar from the last page he was on as well (I think page 17). I hope I'll do a little better next week, but since the next page is the second half of this conversation I don't really know how to liven it up any.