Ozone
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Chapter one Page eight
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Originally I had Zoe running her fingers through her hair in the full-body shower panel, but I couldn't get the foreshortening right so I made her arms hang by her sides instead.
For those who watch my deviantart account, this is the same dress that I have drawn Zoe in previously. It looks short because she is still putting it on in this panel and has not pulled it down over her thighs yet.
I love how Zoe turned out in the third panel. The dress makes her look very tall!
::EDIT::
I added a floor to the shower because she looked funny just floating there… And I realised how awful her feet look O__O
::EDIT 2::
Had to delete this page because DD wouldn’t show the changes >__
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