Para Ten

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Ashwara

on June 1, 2008

A day late on this one, whoops. ha ha. I've been focusing a little too much on an eight page side comic I'm doing. I'll be sure to post it up here when I'm done. I'll probably create a new comic/section for any short, miscellaneous comics that I do and upload them there.

Also I remembered what the dialog from the last page was in the last panel and updated that page. I'm not sure if drunkduck uploaded it correctly though, so if it didn't in the last panel the floating river spirit is supposed to say

"Don't you wonder how you got that eye or how you arrived safely at the ocean?" That might not be it exactly but whatevs. Ha ha

Also I apologize for the messy lettering. I should be using a ruler and a pen, not a brush free form.

I'm really excited to get to the next chapter. I've been doing a lot of assessment and studying of storytelling so I think the following chapters will be, narratively, much better.