Phantasmagoric Fragrance of Flowers Past

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Chapter 2 : Runagated Daughter of Sundra Town

Sleeping Terror

on Jan. 19, 2010

Welcome back to phantasmagoria, please, do come in~

Got to love long titles~ I think I'll use them from now on~

So anyway, look and behold, I have taken your criticism on board~! I still need to tweak parts here and there, but I'll get it up to scratch eventually~ Sadly, I think the shading I used on my bubbles without boarders looked more prominant than when I tried the same technique here on the bubbles with boarders, what do you think~? If you don't notice the shading much, I'll change the way I shade my bubbles so it look as prominant as my boarderless bubbles~

Reshading some sprites, reduced the number of panels, changed the bubbles and font (I'm keeping the person specific fonts however~) and I'm going to tone down on the perspectives~ Its true, I tried much too hard on them and the end result was just 'meh'~ Don't worry, I still make perspectives, but only when I'm really happy with them… Which means paths aren't veering off into the sky and people are incredibly disproportionate to the buildings~

Discuss guys~! Let me know how you feel about the page~!