Shucks, I thought it would be obvious enough that the hideous (as opposed to ugly, which seems to describe my usual product) kids were supposed to be concealing the zombies, what with that bit on page 18. Dangit, this is supposed to be confusing for the reasons I choose!
Speaking of unclear, it's come to my attention that some of the speech might be tough to read. I don't see it, obviously, but if anyone else can't read a word, I'd love if you pointed it out.
Speaking of speaking, it's also come to my attention that some of these Author's Notes make me sound like a dumbass. Since I often don't notice this at first, I have concluded that I must be a dumbass. I considered going back and deleting the worst instances of idiotude, but what's the point, really? A few days go by, and I will only make myself sound like a dumbass in new, exciting ways.
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