Pinky TA 8: Page 16
ozoneocean on Sept. 26, 2017
Page description:
So Ace comes back, and gets a job as test pilot on a tromper, Cc gets in with the crew working on the land ship, and Piny chats with Betty and Colin (or Colon? I don't even know anymore…), about the progress that's happened.
Commentary:
I loved doing the detail and shading effects here, but I can't help but think the balance of the page is off… while the dialogue and pacing seems a bit awkward. I don't know to be honest. I've been working on the page for so long I can't look at it with any sort of balance or objectivity anymore and I just wanted to finish it!
The golden rule is NOT to criticise your own work because it down-sells it and makes it look worse to people; beginner artists do that a lot because they don't know any better and they're often humbly fishing for compliments…
But I don't care at this stage. Something has gone wrong here and I'm not sure what.
IronHorseComics at 2:50PM, June 24, 2018
Beep boop
ozoneocean at 4:45PM, June 24, 2018
Boop beep
Anubis at 12:21PM, June 24, 2018
I like how it looks. Very usefull!
ozoneocean at 4:44PM, June 24, 2018
Thanks man!
TheGhost at 8:21AM, June 24, 2018
Someone said something about testing and notifications. So here I am. Testing, testing, 1, 2, 3.
ozoneocean at 8:56AM, June 24, 2018
Test reply!
Banes at 8:10AM, June 24, 2018
New comment notifications? Aces!
ozoneocean at 8:56AM, June 24, 2018
Hola my man!
KimLuster at 5:32AM, June 24, 2018
Testin' this comment thingy!!
ozoneocean at 5:51AM, June 24, 2018
Test reply!
skreem at 5:14AM, June 24, 2018
PLEas Add MOR Tanks and fanks in avances 4 the MOR tanks.
ozoneocean at 5:51AM, June 24, 2018
As many as you can handle!
KAM at 4:40AM, June 24, 2018
Testing, 1, 2, 3...
ozoneocean at 4:52AM, June 24, 2018
Test reply!
dpat57 at 4:15AM, June 24, 2018
Testing testing! Lovely ass shot, artistically speaking.
ozoneocean at 4:34AM, June 24, 2018
Thankyou! Test reply!
Ironscarf at 3:38AM, June 24, 2018
Really enjoyed the variety of lighting effects here and the use of aerial perspective too. Reminds me of my old fave Don Lawrence.
ozoneocean at 3:54AM, June 24, 2018
What a lovely thing to say!
PaulEberhardt at 2:29AM, June 24, 2018
Test, test, test... :) Cool artwork, by the way, I'll have to drop by more often.
ozoneocean at 3:54AM, June 24, 2018
Thankyou! Test reply!!
PSComics at 12:42AM, June 24, 2018
This is the best webcomic ever!
PSComics at 4:30AM, June 23, 2018
lovely
ozoneocean at 4:58AM, June 28, 2018
hi
ozoneocean at 4:31AM, June 23, 2018
thanks
agentny003 at 3:33PM, Oct. 18, 2017
You artwork never seizes to amaze me. Keep it up.